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Unrequited Love by ~beautifultemptress:iconbeautifultemptress:

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Unrequited Love


This is a faulty obsession
This cure will never take
This wound will bleed forever
This love was a mistake

This choice I made was rash
This hypothesis too bold
This heart I presented you with
will always remain This cold

This inconspicuous glance
This well formed secret lust
This hidden need to touch you
This contact I need so much

This tear worn path to hatred
This all too obvious envy
This unrequited love…
This feeling will condemn me

This unruly heartache
This uncontrollable heart
This phrase I don’t receive
This is tearing me apart

This love will end tragically
This ill fortuned thought
This last fleeting moment
This love I should have fought

This unreturned attraction
This all but deadly ardency
This unrequited love…
This feeling will condemn me.
©2007-2009 ~beautifultemptress
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Submitted: April 24, 2007
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so this is a poem i wrote a few days ago...really sad about a situation with a guy.

this is a personal poem i guess about this guy, but i still hope everyone can relate. i never use names in my poetry so that it is open to all interpretation.


enjoy.
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~FatalBlackRose69:iconFatalBlackRose69: Apr 24, 2007, 8:04:20 PM
poems for the win :]
I hope you and him work things out ...or just you fele happy :D

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Just ignore the smoke and smile :]
~FatalBlackRose69:iconFatalBlackRose69: Apr 24, 2007, 8:04:35 PM
feel*

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Just ignore the smoke and smile :]
Mood: Love ~twilightcat:icontwilightcat: Apr 24, 2007, 8:20:42 PM
i thought it was quite good, very well formed (can't think of right words) well to say it plainly i think it is very good and speaks to me

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My heart, like glass
Balanced on a string

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~Daiana:iconDaiana: Apr 24, 2007, 9:17:54 PM
wow, that's awesome
i loved the words you used and the rhyme scheme was great
the way you began everything with "this" really added something to it
great poem :aww:
i hope things work out for the better with no-name
:hug:
~shekhu:iconshekhu: Apr 24, 2007, 10:03:12 PM
you have poured your heart in this one...liked it...
~shekhu:iconshekhu: Apr 24, 2007, 10:16:31 PM
you have poured your heart in this one...liked it...
~Devynisawsome:iconDevynisawsome: Apr 25, 2007, 7:13:15 AM
dude, how did u come up with that? so sad, but oh, so pretty!!!

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Why are you the one I cant get out of my head? Did you do something so great that now I love you?
~silentwaltz:iconsilentwaltz: Apr 25, 2007, 9:03:01 AM
its so... pretty.... i feel like drawing something for it also. ><'' sniffs sniff...
~beautifultemptress:iconbeautifultemptress: Apr 25, 2007, 2:56:35 PM
lol, go right ahead!

i adore art to go with things i write, it makes me happy!

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~temptation usually comes in through a door that was deliberately left open

(open the door)
~beautifultemptress:iconbeautifultemptress: Apr 25, 2007, 2:58:18 PM
i write alot you know that.
i guess when you write as much as i do, and you get into as messed up situations as i do,
you come up with good poetry. lol

so glad you like it!

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~temptation usually comes in through a door that was deliberately left open

(open the door)
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